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The last chapter is out. Sakura is the mom.
Let’s talk about it.
There were many subjects the Gaiden chapters could have
covered. Though Kaguya was defeated, the end of the manga opens the way for
several new and interesting stories.
I don’t think anyone of us expected it to be centered around
Sarada. Certainly, we didn’t expect her to question her parenthood.
Sure, the moment we saw the last chapter of the manga, there
was plenty of speculation about Karin being Sarada’s real mother due to how
similar they look in black and white. However, I don’t think most of us really
expected Kishimoto to go there.
Lo and Behold! The first chapter ends with Sarada theorizing
Karin is her mother.
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It was a surprising decision but not a bad one.
For one, Sarada was a pretty nice protagonist and Sasuke
sucking at basic human relationships made way too much sense. Still, the main draw of
these chapters was simply curiosity of who the mother really was. Would
Kishimoto really go there?
He didn’t.
While some people may sigh in relief now, I’m not satisfied
with this.
I expected it. Let’s be honest here. We are all familiar
with a ‘Misunderstanding Plot’. In fact we expect it. What is weird is for the
author to do the opposite.
And you know what? Misunderstanding Plots suck.
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The reveal creates several problems. Starting with the
mystery of Sarada’s birth. The girl went poking around several times, looking
for answers and didn’t find them. Why?
All of this could have been avoided – easily at that – if
someone had just talked to the girl. Sakura and Shizune’s silence is all sorts
of weird in light of the truth, since Sarada is just a normal girl as opposed
to, say, a genetic experiment using Uzumaki and Uchiha genes.
This is the main problem of a Misunderstanding Plot. It
makes the people caught up in it look foolish at the end.
He does not pass down anything. He predates. He cannibalizes
his kids.
As counterpoint we have Sarada and Sakura. Their blood
relationship is in question. Sarada believes Sakura is not her real mother but
comes to the conclusions it doesn’t matter if they are not biologically
related. Sakura is her mother. What Sakura has given her is way more important
than blood.
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You can see then how the revelation of their real blood
relationship clashes somehow with the theme.
It’s like saying ‘blood doesn’t matter BUT you two are
related we just need to make that clear.’
To Kishimoto’s credit, Sarada doesn’t find out. Which is his
way of having his pie and eating it, but the last minute reveal solely for the
audience’s benefit does undermine the message of the Gaiden.
This reveals a flaw that is common in many writers, the lack
of ability to really follow through on their themes when said themes run
contrary to what is accepted.
You have to wonder how much is due to themselves and how much
is due to editors and the like. Being constrained by the limitation of the
genre can be a pain at times. For example, if this hadn’t been published in
Jump, would Sakura still have ended up as the mom?
It is something to think about.
I don't mind Sarada being Sakura's biological daughter because there was no alternative that made sense to me (why would Sasuke let Karin do that?).
ReplyDeleteAs an author, how would you have handled it?
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DeleteTwo ways.
DeleteOne, Sasuke had sex with Karin. It makes about as much sense as him mustering enough sex drive to have sex with Sakura since let's face it Sasuke is retarded when it comes to human relationships. Maybe Karin became his travelling companion post series or whatever. Anyway, she dies at childbirth and Sasuke leaves the kid with Sakura since he is aware he is not father of the year material.
Two, and this is the one I like most, Sarada is actually Orochimaru's genetic experiment. She's a mix of Uzumaki (Karin) and Uchiha (Sasuke) DNA. Sasuke discovered the whole thing and he and Sakura took the girl as their own. Makes for an even better contrast since the bad guy and his clones were also genetic experiments.