Totally Legit Threats |
Want to know when a villain just doesn't work?
When he doesn't have teeth.
Villains must carry with them a sense of threat... unless
they are ineffectual comedy villains or mooks but that’s another case entirely.
Like Captain Tsubasa taught us a long time ago, no one is scared of a toothless tiger.
Sometimes, the writer forgets
that one of the points of villains is them being able to challenge the
heroes. Hazard will admit
there are exceptions. Invincible Hero has a place at times, but in most cases
being so into your characters that you just don’t challenge them is not a good thing.
The villain is one of the driving forces behind a story. If the reader starts to feel the villain is just a waste of time, well, it will soon begin to follow that so is the story.
Let’s take for
example Fairy Tail. Now, I can say a lot about Fairy Tail and what it
does wrong (I shamelessly admit I read it for the fanservice), I’ll limit myself to the
current arc.
Though Hazard may do a Pet Peeve post on Fairy Tail later.
In any case, We have this big
Tournament. Seven years have passed. The world has grown stronger. Our heroes
need to train to catch up and regain their title as the Strongest
Guild. Some big things were being set up.
Then the training arc
got skipped by time shenanigans and they ended up using convenient plot device to
power up. Now what I just wrote doesn't really seem to have to do much
with the initial topic, but bear with me. It is the first nail on the “What was the point then?”
coffin.
Tournament arrives.
Guilds are introduced. Raven Tail! The big bad guild, that has been built up
over past arcs. Sabertooth! The current Strongest Guild! With 2 Dragon Slayers! And plenty of other
characters that promise challenging matches for our heroes.
Laxus stomps Raven
Tail.
Like, the guy takes
most of the big members of the guild (leader included) and kicks their asses. Raven Tail, which had been
foreshadowed since pretty damn early in the manga. What was the point of all
that then?
Sabertooth is next.
The two new Dragon Slayers fight Natsu and Gajeel and… get their asses kicked.
At this point you
start wondering just why it was even necessary for these fights to happen. What’s
the point? These guys aren't a challenge. Every guy built up as a threat ends
up disappointing. It’s not an arc about Fairy Tail fighting facing a challenge.
It’s an arc about Fairy Tail getting into a fight with a bunch of mooks.
With all due respect
to mooks, they just aren't a main dish.
Then the dragons
come, and you’re really hoping things go differently but you are not exactly
holding your breath.
To Mashima’s credit,
the dragons are a bit more of a legit threat. There are like five of them…
until one instantly defects to the other side… Anyway, Gray dies… then
gets immediately brought back and it’s totally human’s counterattacking time…
Now some may think
I’m being a big harsh. Of course the good guys win. It’s a thing. It happens.
Yeah, I won’t deny it, but I’m not talking about winning or losing. I’m talking
about sense of threat.
After a point, Fairy
Tail villains just lose that. You just know how things are going to play out,
and the thing about writing is that despite the reader being aware of things
like “Good guy wins” you have to make him feel the danger.
Let’s compare with other Shounen series.
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Naruto
Naruto makes its villains credible threats in two ways.
First with the time tried tactic of having someone on the good side
lose. Someone who is not really that vital to the plot, yet recognizable enough
so that we can feel sad/angry/whatever that he/she/it lost.
For example, Rock Lee
during his fight against Gaara. It was one badass fight. We were totally
rooting for Lee, because damn it he’s awesome. Sadly, for all his kung fu and
hard work, Lee lost. Gaara won that fight cementing himself as a threat. It was
a similar case for Negi vs Hinata, and much later one for Gaara against
Deidara.
The second way
Naruto builds up the threat level is by using another time honored method, kill
the mentor.
Sarutobi. Asuma.
Jiraya. All dead mentors. Important characters killed; so the reader can go
“well, damn. They can die.”
Death is a really
effective way to sell the villain. Probably the most effective one.
Note, that doesn't
mean you need death in your Shounen manga to build up your villain.
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Bleach
Bleach good guys
with a single exception do not die. Seriously. In spite of all the crap that happens, the
manga goes for a long time without killing a good guy. In spite of that, Aizen and
others never really lost that “He’s dangerous” vibe.
Except maybe
Tousen. He kind of sucks. And Yammy.
Anyway, despite an
overwhelming amount of good guy wins in Bleach, Kubo could sell the threats.
He did this by
having his villains deliver curbstomps. Mainly to Ichigo.
When Byakuya first
appears and nearly kills Ichigo without even trying, that was something. It was
an elegant victory that firmly established him as a massive threat. Someone in
another level entirely. It took time and effort for Ichigo to reach his level
and even then the final battle between the two was no walk in the part for Ichigo.
Then came Aizen.
Three words. Fingertip Sword Stop. Kubo put a lot of work into making Aizen a
big threat, maybe too much work.
When Aizen took the scene, you knew the good guys were going to get their asses kick. Really, Kubo probably all the way to the other end, making the villain too good.In any case, you can say many things about Aizen, but you can never say he is not a big deal. You were amused with the invincible villain or you were raging and hoping for his defeat, but damn you were interested.
Which says a lot given the quality (or lack of thereof) of that particular arc.
The element of
danger is tied to the element of conflict. Without a good villain to bring that danger a story can
just fall apart or just plain fail to hold the reader’s interest.
Good thing FT has
cute girls.
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